Monday, July 29, 2013

100 Word Challenge: August prompt

….my heart was beating incredibly fast…

Don’t forget to really think out side the box to make your writing really creative.

28 comments:

  1. UNATHI 5BLUE: MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREDIBLY FAST BECAUSE WE HAD TO READ A POEM THAT YOU MADE AND READ IT TO THE CLASS.I WAS SO SCARED BECASE I WAS SCARED THAT MY CLASS MATES WOULD MAKE FUN OF MY POEM. MY HEART WAS BEATING LIKE A DRUM,I WAS SWEATING ON MY BODY. THE ONLY REASON IM SCARED IS THAT IM A REALLY QUITE AND SHY GIRL, SO YOU CAN IMAGINE HOW SCARY IT WOULD BE FOR ME.SO I WAS TRYING TO HIDE MYSELF BUT I WAS THE FIRST ONE CALLED UP!SO AS I WAS READING MY POEM I SHAKING LIKE A SKELETON WHEN ITS COLD BUT PEOPLE ACTUALLY THOUGHT IT WAS NICE. SO IT WAS REALLY NICE TO KNOW THAT MY CLASS MATES DIDNT LAUGH AT MY POEM. THAT WAS THE BEST DAY EVER AND I WILL NEVER FORGET IT.....

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  2. On Thursday the 1st of August I was so scared for school I didn't know what to do. I told my dad I was sick but he said I was LIEING but it was ture. My English teacher (miss clowes) was waiting for my work from last TERM. When I got to school I was hoping that she would not come but just then she was there MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREDIBLY FAST in class she asked me for my work and I was looking for a place to hide but then I told her is at home. I was SCASRED and that very minture I got a demeit and she called my parenes... By nashmika in 5green

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    1. Nashmika your a exelent writer

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  3. On the day I went to the movies with my dad my heart was beating incredibly fast as I was watching Fast and Furies six then I got a racing game after the movie I played several times and I was Domenic in the movie.The next day I woke up at 4:16am I felt the rush and my heat pumping 114 times in 1 minute I played the hole day up and down my bunk bed I fell off the bunk bed 8 times well I was going up then I went to breakfast.By Sheunesu in 5green

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  4. One Tuesday night I was sleeping in my bedroom wondering about the moon in the high sky. All of a sudden I heard the strangest sound coming near my bedroom, closer and closer to my room. The foot-steps getting louder and louder, I was REALLY scared and I was hiding under my covers hoping the person will not come straight to my room. Thenmy heart was beating incredibly fast because I was so worried if he or she was going to take me or parents, maybe they can take my parents and or even me, myself.
    Tebello 5B

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  5. My haert was beating incredibly fast and my body started to ache, my haed was spinning around. And then I began to shake. Everyone stared at me while i crying." Oh help I think I'm going to faint." Then someone yelled, "Give her a break." I figured out why my heart was beating so fast everytime this boy Kevin Honey passed by, my heart just beats fast, here he comes let me quickly hide or shriek and say goodbye. He said, " hello my name is Kevin, what is yours?" I said I love you my heart just stopped.
    Amo 5B

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  6. On Monday I was so happy but there's this boy in my class that a really hate his name is EDWARD anyway.I was hoping for a lovely day and a happy one too but when I was walking pass the boys to go to the bathroom I heared that EDWARD was going to ask me out I got sared and my heart was beating incredibly fast. In Math he asked me out and I scremed with all my might and said yes I didn't know why but I just did and I never told my munm and dad and that was my day really
    By nashmika 5green

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  7. It is 31st July at night. I wake up on the 1 of August and my heart was beating incredibily fast I do not know why. My day was brilliant so far getting good marks. My Afrikaans teacher told me to give some sort of document and I go.So I was not concentrating and I go all the way close Ms Ria's office and I walk into the boys bathroom and wash my face and then I realised that I was in the boys bathroom and I give the document. so much for saying it is a good day.
    Ajay grade 5 Green

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  8. My heart was beating incredibly fast as I saw space shuttle take off. I won a competition that I could be in a space shuttle before it takes off. That day was the best day of my life because I saw a couple of astronauts, use the bathroom in the space shuttle then it was time for me to leave I left my wallet then I had no money to go on the bus I only realized when I reached the bus stop reached into my pocket and I realised that I left my wallet in the space shuttle cabin.
    By Edward Grade 5 Green

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  9. ON MONDAY MORNING I WENT TO SCHOOL,PUT MY BAG DOWN AND WENT TO THE BOYS BATHROOM AND I SAW GRADE SEVENS PLAYING CRICKET.I WAS SO SURPRISED,AS I WALKED TO THE BASIN TO WASH MY FACE THE CRICKET BALL WENT FLYING SO HIGH IT FELL IN THE TOILET.THE GRADE SEVENS WENT TOWARDS THE TOILET TO PICK UP THE BALL BUT THERE WAS A BIG PILE OF HORSE SIZED DOODOO.WHEN THE FIRST GRADE SEVEN WENT TO SEE HE CAME RUNNING OUT OF THE BATHROOM WITH HIS HAND COVERING HIS EYES AND WHEN HE WAS RUNNING HIS PANTS FELL AND EVERYBODY SAW HIS RAINBNOW UNDERPANTS!!!

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  10. ON MONDAY MORNING I WENT TO SCHOOL,PUT MY BAG DOWN AND WENT TO THE BOYS BATHROOM.WHEN I WALKED IN MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREDIBLY FAST AS I SAW GRADE SEVENS PLAYING CRICKET IN THE BATHROOM.WHEN I WAS WASHING MY FACE I SAW THE CRICKET BALL FLYING INTO THE TOILET.ONE OF THE GRADE SEVENS WENT TO GO GET THE CRICKET BALL BUT IN THE TOILET THERE WAS A HORSE SIZED DOODOO.THE GRADE SEVEN THAT SAW THE DOODOO CAME RUNNING OUT OF THE BATHROOM WITH HIS HAND COVERING HIS FACE AND AS HE WAS RUNNING HIS PANTS FELL DOWN.
    BY OWEN 5 GREEN!!!

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  11. What I lovely story

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  12. I woke up Friday morning at 05:00 because I had to go to school, so we had a hour to prepare and we left at six'o clock and arrived at seven . Then it happened everyone laughed at me and MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREDIBLY FAST I ran to the bathroom as fast as I could but it didn't help. I was the the school joke, everywhere I turned I got laughed at. So I ran and I fell badly. Then I woke up and realized it what just a dream at least knows my secret. So don't tell anyone shhhhh.

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  13. By lwando msindo 5 green

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  14. I was just a little The monster was attacking and it saw me my haert was beating increadibly fast my dad jumped and the monster ate him.
    20 years later. I am a knight . I am going to kill the monster.It is a long journey, swamps, rivers, sharks and eels.I ran into a hut old lady was there she gave me powers. If I got her a birds egg.I killed the the bird and got I gave the egg.I got the powers it was fire powers and strenth. I got to the cave and killed the monster.
    Sanskar Kalideen 5G.

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  15. ON THURSDAY LAST WEEK I WAS DAYDREAMING THAT A LION WAS CHASING ME.MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREADIBLY FAST WHEN THE LION JUMPED OFF THE MOUNTAIN.I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO FIRST EAT ME THEN EAT MY BELOVED LUNCHBAR.IT TURNS OUT THAT THE LION WAS ACTUALLY
    AFTER THE PIECE OF STEAK I HAD IN MY BACKPACK.I REALLY HAVE NO IDEA WHY I HAD STEAK IN MY BACKPACK SO DONT ASK!WHEN I WOKE UP FROM MY DAY DREAM I WAS SLAPED BY MY FRIEND LORCAN.I FOUND OUT THAT HE SLAPED ME BECAUSE I WAS A SLEEP.
    DONE BY OWEN REDDY!!!!PS.I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!!!!!

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  16. Once upon a time there was a girl called Polly who was quiet and sweet.Then one day she was walking down the street where she saw a sign showing this way are sweets ,so she went.Instead she then saw a teapot garage where people were filling their tanks from that place.She was shocked she then saw people coming to greet her giving her things and she was a queen she was pleased and started acting like one.She then woke with a bang and realized this was all a dream.Then she wished she went there again. Anushka Singh (5 Yellow)

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  17. MY DAY WAS AWESOME!!!I HAD SIX CHOCOLATES IN MY BAG THAT I WAS EATING ONE-BY-ONE EACH SECOND DURING BREAK.I FORGOT TO MENSION THAT THE CHOCOLATE WAS A TEX AND IT WAS DELISIOUS!AS SOON AS BREAK WAS OVER I JUST REALISED THAT IT WAS ENGLISH NEXT!MY HEART WAS BEATING INCREADIBLY FAST BECAUSE I HAD JUST VISUALISED MISS CLOWES AS AN EVIL FIRE BREATHING DRAGON THAT WAS OUT TO EAT MY CHOCOLATES AND GIVE ME DEMERITS EACH TIME I DIDNT GIVE HER A CHOCOLATE.THEN I REALISED THAT I HAVE HID MY CHOCOLATES IN A PLACE NO ONE KNOWS........IN MY TUMMY!!!
    BY OWEN REDDY 5 GREEN!

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  18. On Wednesday the 7th of August we closed school but let me tell u a story. We changed subjects and went to Afrikaans. We had a dobble with our techer that troble on talk no moving man I can't handly it. So we study for a test and we were about to mark but then other kids we outside and then Mrs Kitching got scared. We said we fished at 12o'clock looked at the time then Mrs Kitching said time is up we all scred ya and we didn't mark our test how cool it that. By nashmika 5green

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  19. Over my holiday I was so happy. I was chatting to friend over bbm, eating chocolate and sweets.Listen to music and right now I'm listing to music (I love music)and how can I forget all about tv the best thing the whole holiday.My English teacher Miss Clows gave us home work I mean really home work on holiday who dose home work on holiday. I did my home work but I didn't complete and I'm scared because Mis clows is a dragon that kills stuff and I'm scared what if she kills me for not doing my home work. GOD PLEASE HELP ME I DONT WANT TO DIE SO EARLY.

    By Nashmika 5 green

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  20. It was a very hot day,me and my brother were walking home from school.AND RIGHT THERE THE BIGGEST DOG I HAVE EVER SEEN.My heart was beating incredibly fast,my brother looked at me he saw I was scared and laughed at me.And what would you do I asked him (in my head).I just panicked , I calmed down for a second and thought it was over but no it began it chased us for three streets.It was finaly over and we went home . I saw my mom and ran straight to her , I told her the whole story and she told me "I know I saw you".

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